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    November 03

    意见贴

    其实我很羞涩的,比如我从来不敢让老师当着我的面看我的作文。
    所以我现在能厚着脸皮大张旗鼓地请大家来参观我的小说连载真的是付出了很大的勇气。
    所以你们也不能辜负我的勇气,对它有什么意见和建议,当然当然,主要是夸我的话,就在这个帖子里面写出来吧~

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    Pearl Gaowrote:
    鼓励!
    Nov. 11
    就是说麻,来回换容易让读者糊涂,应该用“时间旅行者的妻子”的方法处理。
    Nov. 6
    我也琢磨了下“我”是谁来着。人物似曾相识。
    Nov. 6
    楠 张wrote:
    主人公的第一人称确实变换了
    Nov. 6
    兰成 肖wrote:
    是我眼花了还是第一人称主人公确实在变换
    Nov. 5
    winniewrote:
    你是新偶像!
    Nov. 4
    没看到你要写的那出戏啊。
    Nov. 3
    楠楠 chenwrote:
    还不错呀 我还挺期待后续的
    Nov. 3
    丁丁wrote:
    能看。
    Nov. 3

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